The garammer and spelling my not be the best but the story is there hope you guys like it. Based off a hero from the game City of heros.
Mazull
> From the eyes of suicidearmy)
>
>
> New to Jagged Legion, I have seen many things good and
>bad but nothing will prepare me for things to come.
>For I know that there is an evil beyond anything I have
>ever imagined ahead of us.
> It has always been there, watching us, when we fight the
>constant attacks of villians. It has always been there,
> when we were locking Beef Cake in the bathroom after
>he's been in there awhile.
> We all feel it we, know it's coming.
> The question is are we prapared for those things to
>come?
>
>
>
> (Part 1)
>
> Well, it was Thursday night and we were all doing
>different things.
> Beef Cake was in Recluse's Victory, tearing it up
>looking for some shiny metal thing.
> Loridai was pounding on some poor guy that challenged
>her, poor guy. And I believe I was with Lazulie, Pro
>Zack, and Miss Moonlight at the time, beatin' the hell
>out of some of the Circle of Thorns.
> Those [censored] really piss me off sometimes.
> Always capturing people, thinking they can do some kinda
>spell to defeat us, but it usally ends up with them
>seeing us, and us pounding their faces in.
> Anyways, we all got this feeling that we needed to go to
>Recluse's Victory.
> So we all formed up with Beef Cake. We were really
>wondering why we were there, but all we know is that we
>needed to be here.
> So we're looking around and the ground started to shake
>as bright, red lighting flew from the ground.
> It got really loud, I mean really loud. I couldn't even
>hear myself speak and then boom.
> It got quiet, not one sound. It was really, really
>deathly quiet. And then BOOM!! All hell broke loose. We
>all flew back and were hurt
> pretty badly. There were villians everywhere; Circle of
>Thorns, Outcasts, Trolls, Rikti, Arachnos... I mean all
>of them. The sky was darkened with them.
> I'll admit I was scared off my [censored] becasue the
>hospital Reclamator was down so when you're defeated out
>here you're done.
>Finished.
> Dead.
> Anyways, a group of Rikti come in and quickly tried
>putting us to sleep but I burst my spines up, formed some
>in my hand, threw them with quick speed and... Nothing?!
> I didnt even hurt it.
> I was getting really pissed, I turn behind me and none
>of us were doing damage to anything. What the hell was
>happening?!
> Then we started falling. First was Lazulie. Then
>Moonlight. Oh, my god, what is happening?!
> Pro Zack was next as a werewolf pounced on him.
> Oh, god, not Loridai. Please, god, no!
> I turned around and, oh man, Beef is awesome. He was
>holding of 20 of them! But finally, they took him down
>too.
> As I stood there, alone, all of the sudden untouched,
>watching my friends die before me, I wept as I tried and
>tried to kill those [censored] that killed my friends.
> And, in the middle off all my rage, frustration, and
>sadness,
> I woke up in my bedroom with sweat and tears on my face.
>Whew, it was only a dream. Or was it things to come?
>
> (to be conitueed)
>
>
> Part 2
> "...When you think you'll lose, you've already lost.
>When you think you've won, you're victorious..."
>
> The next day, when I told Pro Zack about my dream, he
>patted me on the back and said, "Hey buddy, it was just a
>dream. Relax. I'm going to El Super Mexicano in a few,
>want anything?" I was so not hungry, so I declined, but
>thanked him for the offer. Pro Zack left the base with a
>wave.
>
> So the only two people left in the base were Lazaloo and
>myself. She was floating in the air, mumbling something,
>as I plopped down in a chair across the room. I started
>dozing off when the Com went off. It was the Beef man! He
>was having trouble, and let me just say for the record,
>if Beef Cake says he's having trouble, that means its
>bad. I quickly woke Laz, although I think she was a bit
>annoyed by it. The smack she gave me might have something
>to do with it, maybe?
>
> The problem was in Peregrine Island. A Quarry was lured
>to and was attacking rookie heroes near the ferry. Beef
>Cake was hurting a little; Laz knew right away. She ran
>in and with a wave of her hand, Beef Cake was completely
>healed. Even the wear and tear on his clothes had been
>mended. Everytime I see that, it boggles my mind. I mean,
>I have my own regen healing powers, but it has its limits
>and it only affects me. Hers, on the other hand, sometime
>seems limitless.
>
> Well, I wanted to get in the battle already, so I
>focused my senses as spines burst out all over my body
>and a long sharp spine coming out of each arm. I look
>over at Beef Cake. Oh sweet! He was doing my favorite
>attack of his, the one where he twirls his arm. When he
>made contact with the Quarry, there was a loud crack and
>the monster was airborne. When it landed, it made a huge
>crater.
>
> I smiled and said, "Oh yeah, Beef! Watch this!" I ran up
>the Quarry's body, did a backflip and slammed my spines
>home. And again, the monster was airborne. Beef chuckled
>as he looked at me, I saw the familiar smirk, as he said
>"That's nothin!" He then slammed his foot on the ground
>and the Quarry went flying for the third time. Finally,
>Laz came up to us and smacked us both on the behind, and
>said, "Alright boys! Can we have this pissing contest
>another time? It's time we finished this..."
>
> Beef and I look at each other, smiled and agreed. Laz
>finally cracked a smile, as she said, "Hey Sui, time for
>a powerup!." She touched my wrist with her hands (which
>were now glowing) and I instantly felt like a million
>bucks. My spine started glowing red and I felt raw power
>inside, wanting to be let loose. I looked at Beef Cake
>and asked him if he was ready. He chuckled again,
>muttered something about being born ready, and we both
>went in. Five minutes later, the three of us were looking
>down at a pile of rubble in victory, so we decided to
>celebrate at Pocket D. But alas, as soon as we were about
>to head out, the Com went off. It was Miss Moonlight!
>
> "Guys!! He's out here in Recluse's Victory!! And he's
>attacking everything and everyone in sight! Icebox, Dyre
>Knight, and Jason the X are already engaged in keeping
>the innocent alive but we need more help!!. I've
>contacted Pro Zack, Choseone and Mig. They are already on
>their way, so get your butts over here, pronto!
>
> *sigh* a Heroes job is never done...what was that quote
>Romatohm said?...oh yeah...A Hero Does as Hero Should...
>
> (to be continued)
>
>
> Part 3
>
>
>
> (To be or not to be, that is the ultimate question)
>
>
>
>
>
> The disturbance was form a bunch of villians of the
>stalker and brute types. They had been attacking the hero
>pillboxes. After several attacks and defeats the villians
>were thinning in numbers. As my supergroup arrived at the
>final pillbox, the last of the villians were putting up a
>good stand. As the rest of my team were engageing a brute
>in rock form, I felt a presence behind me. I turned
>around and there was the most beuatiful woman i had ever
>seen. She smiled and waved both her hands towards me. All
>at once, I was in love with her and I would do anything
>to be with her even for a sliver of time. The team
>approached her, ready to attack her. Why??? I cant let
>this happen! She hasnt done anything wrong. So i did the
>one thing I thought I would never do. I stood in front of
>her, ready to attack my own super group. Pro Zack looked
>at me angrily and said, "Sui get your [censored] out of
>the way, she is a villian. A dominator type." "LIES!!!
>she innocent!" I scream back.
> Icebox looks at Pro Zack and says, "Damnit, dude, Sui is
>confused under her spell!" All Pro Zack could say was
>"[censored]!!!" I was about to charge in with all my
>fury, as the woman behind me smiled waved and left. But
>Beefcake was there like a flash grabbing me in a great
>big bear hug and sqeezing me, saying over and over again,
>"Calm down little buddy, no one here is going to hurt
>you." I was getting out of control, spines going
>everywhere. Pro Zack made the decision that I was a
>greater risk then the woman, which just upset me even
>more. Pro Zack screamed at Laz and Moonlight get over
>here. "Girls, quick!" They came up in front of me on each
>side. I was screaming at them not to touch me. To get
>away. Then the girls started glowing, getting closer and
>closer. I tried to get away and fought Beefcakes embrace,
>but he kept his grip with ease. Then with a sudden
>release, I flew foward. Moonlight and Laz caught me,
>still glowing. They both hugged me and in my mind all I
> heard was, "Its alright Sui, we're here." And then I saw
>everthing thing like I had a new sight. I saw it so
>clearly. "Oh God! What have I done? How can they trust me
>now?" And then darkness........
>
> "Blake........ Blake Mathews........" I started
>stirring. It was my sister, Sue (later to be known as
>Hard Rock Sue). I had worked late last night for the
>Suicide Squad Division of the Paragon Police Deparment
>for almost certain death missions. This was a squad for
>heros with lower powers. What I had was a fast
>regeneration rate. I got up, kicked my sister out of my
>room and started getting my uniform on and man I love my
>beret! I always thought it looked good on me. I was
>getting ready for a raid tonight on a Crey base that was
>heavily fortified. It was a solo mission. Simple. Get in
>get intel and get out, then report. Well, I got there,
>saw only 1 guard and thought almost immediately that
>something was wrong, but I ignored it. Being the *bad word*y
>youngster I was, I got in the base with ease and smiled,
>"This'll be easy." All of a sudden, all the lights came
>on and I was surrounded by about 50 Crey. There was no
>way I was getting out of here alive. "So, I'll go down
>fighting."
> I thought to myself. I got into my stance then i heard a
>whisper, very faint, saying "There is no need to fight
>Mr. Mathews. We dont want you dead yet." Then bam!!! I
>was frozen in place. Shot by one of those icey crey
>pistols. "We have you now, Mr. Mathews. Oh, by the way,
>you were turned in by your on squad." BETRAYED!!!
>
> They had me laid out in a capsule the whole time. All I
>can think of is revenge to the Suicide Squad. That was my
>drive, that was my will power, that is what kept me from
>screaming from the hours upon hours of testing the crey
>were giving me. Then they started pouring poison gas into
>my capsule. I would choke, gag vomit, and pass out. But
>my regenaration powers kept me alive every time. They
>were done. They had picked me up, taken some blood,
>sprayed me down and threw me back in the capsule. This
>went on for 6 mounths. My body became immune to the
>poison and started producing its own. The next day, the
>regular routine on me continued, but something was
>different. It hurt, not my breathing, not my eyes, but my
>whole body. My skin was burning like nothing I had ever
>felt before. It felt like something trying to get out of
>me. Trying to poke out of my skin. And then it happened.
>Poison spines burst from my body, over and over again.
>Going everywere. They went into to the
> machines, destroying them. Suddenly, they went into the
>Crey employees, killing them instanly. A few of the
>armored gaurds came in, loaded to the teeth, but there
>was no stopping these spines. These spines were hungry
>and they wanted revenge. I was shot with a crey pistol
>and the ice started forming over me. "Not this time
>punk." I screamed as I broke free. A long spine in each
>arm grew out like long swords. Some even formed in my
>hands, like darts. I threw some at the man who had shot
>me. He died instanly without even a grunt. The other 3
>tried to form up on me, but I took two more out easily.
>The last one charged at me. I did a backflip and sliced
>him in two. I looked around at what I had done and
>laughed like a mad man. Then as quick as they had come
>out, the spines withdrew. The pain was so intense that I
>passed out.
>
>
> Sui... Suicidearmy... I awoke with a sudden slap to the
>face. It was Dar Kin. He told me that the base had been
>attacked by Captain Mako and Ghost Widow. Everyone was
>fine and gave chase. I looked around and the base it was
>in ruins. Even my favorite chair was in pieces. Dar Kin
>said, "It is time to go, Sui." I nodded and we headed out
>for yet another battle.
>
> (to be continued)
>
>
> PART 4
>
>
> ( I was blind but now I see… )
>
>
>
> Dar-kin and I had arrived in the heat of the battle.
>They were all
> fighting
> Captain Mako, Ghost Widow was no were in sight, and then
>my comm went
> off.
> It was my sister.
>
> “…ksssssk…Sui…kssssssk need help… kssssskk No way I can
>hold them!
> Kssssssssssk.” I left the battle without telling a soul.
>It was my
> sister
> who was in trouble. I arrived in the hollows near a cave
>and saw my
> sister.
> I asked her what was wrong, but she only looked at me,
>gave me a hug,
> and
> then pointed around the cave. It was Lord Recluse
>himself!!! Oh, how
> I
> hated this villain of all villains.
>
> Sue looked at me and said, “Let’s go get him big
>brother.”
>
> I agreed.
>
> We ran in towards him and as soon as he saw us all he
>did was smile and
> say,
> “Everyone welcome the Mathew’s family.”
>
> Sue and I quickly dispatched of Recluse’s minions and
>came face to face
> with
> him. He was laughing and quick like lightning he
>destroyed my comm
> set. He
> chuckled again, “No need for that. I don’t think you’ll
>be leaving
> here,
> Suicide Army!!!” He came in upon us, quickly throwing
>Sue 50 feet
> before
> she could even respond. Oh how that angered me. I burst
>my spines and
> charged. We went back and forward several times until
>finally he
> stopped me
> by a double uppercut. It was like being hit by a
>building. As I laid
> there
> injured Recluse came down with the final stroke but Sue
>was there!! In
> granite form.
>
> Lord Recluse’s robotic arm just made a screeching noise
>as it came down
> on
> her chest and then Recluse started getting mad. He was
>feverishly
> attacking
> Sue, breaking pieces away from her bit by bit.
>
> “I know there is a soft spot under all of this!!”
>growled Recluse.
>
> Sue looked down to me, smiled, and took her com off.
>Then she slapped
> it on
> my wrist. I started crying and kept saying, “No, no, no,
>no… Just give
> me a
> sec. I’ll be fine.” But I knew that wasn’t true.
>
> Sue said, “Hey big brother, it was fun and I love you
>but my time is
> over.
> I will always be in you heart. Tell Myst that she was
>right.” Then
> she
> laughed, “..and tell Lori nanner nanner…she never got
>me.” With that
> she
> pushed the emergency teleport button on the wrist com. I
>screamed with
> sadness.
>
> 5...
> She grabbed Lord Recluse and forced him back. “Go
>Sue!!!”
>
> 4.....
> She uppercuts him and he falls back.
>
> 3......
> Oh no, Ghost Widow is here in the shadows.
>
> 2......
> Ghost Widow grabs Sue with the souls of the dead,
>lifting her in the
> air.
> Recluse was laughing like a mad man…
>
> 1….
> “I…I love you big brother. I loved you all…”
>
> Recluse came down on her with the finale stroke. I
>teleport. I came
> back
> into the base crying. No one was here. Sirens were going
>off all over
> the
> place. What the hell was going on?? But I didn’t care…
>My sister
> just
> died for me.
>
> Why for me?
>
> I passed out... I awoke in a Crey capsule. Oh god not
>again!!!
>
>
>
> ( To be continued… )
>
>
> (The Long Wait)
>
>
> Part 5
>
>
>
>
> I awoke in the crey capsule or what i thought was the
>crey capsule.
> What it really was, was a med bed new the the paragon
>hosptial.
> News got around fast about my sister and there were alot
>of heros gatherd for her funeral.
> I even got a phone call from statesman pfff like that
>ment anything to me at the moment.
> All i wanted was one thing REVENGE to recluse and all
>his lackys.
> I left the hosptial after throwing all the stupid cards
>and flowers away.
> Im no sap.
> It wasnt hard to follow Recluses backtrail he left
>minion at every stop.
> Which was okay with me i needed some good old fashion
>killing.
> I was tired of playing goodie goodie and watching
>friends die.
> Now they pay.
> I went into a group of ten archnos killing five quickly
>by throwing spines towards there necks one came untop of
>me i stabed him in the gut and pushed down.
> But my hunger wasnt done oh no not by far.
>Four left i smiled whch one of you dies first.
> Three came at me one ran.
> I jumped at two of them sliceing them in half threw
>spines ant the runner knocked him down dead.
> Now theres one left i had time to play.
> I beat him from a inch from life while questioning him
>on got the information i needed.
> I now know were Recluse is.
> He will pay.
> I head out towards his bas killing sevral of his
>servents on my way.
> I brake in destroy his gaurds.
> Now nothing in the way of him and me.
> We lock eyes
> He grins.
> Looks like this fight has been long awatied eh Mr.
>Mathews
> We start running towards each other my spines at the
>ready his extra arms at the ready.
> Let the fight begin.
>
>
> (To Be Continued)
>
>
>
